tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6789689551731499139.post286403532954834187..comments2024-03-26T02:43:09.109+00:00Comments on notes on paper: Leave To Stand : a short story about lust ... and microwaves. Julie Kirkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02606220227331834682noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6789689551731499139.post-45588015135296454332019-04-02T00:23:28.993+01:002019-04-02T00:23:28.993+01:00Loved it. Nothing beats sexy and funny at the sam...Loved it. Nothing beats sexy and funny at the same time. Keep up the good work.Kathy Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02112268160308228839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6789689551731499139.post-38283781501450534602019-02-01T10:04:24.042+00:002019-02-01T10:04:24.042+00:00What a great story ... and the unexpected ending! ...What a great story ... and the unexpected ending! I really enjoyed reading it and nodded smugly at the thought of my microwave on the counter at waist height. I agree with Deb's comments about compiling a collection of short stories for your second book. Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18032490985687716495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6789689551731499139.post-55879389433464213112019-01-31T19:38:32.239+00:002019-01-31T19:38:32.239+00:00Great story (although slightly worried that I may ...Great story (although slightly worried that I may be judged by having a microwave set into a wall unit!). The story works really well by being written in the 2nd person. You really need to think about making your second book a compilation of short stories!debs14https://www.blogger.com/profile/14521565769251816528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6789689551731499139.post-85900820052841603072019-01-31T10:16:25.426+00:002019-01-31T10:16:25.426+00:00Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it Becky! Thank you ...Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it Becky! Thank you for letting me know. I'm really heartened that people see to want more! :-DJulie Kirkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02606220227331834682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6789689551731499139.post-21394818998177087452019-01-31T10:15:14.533+00:002019-01-31T10:15:14.533+00:00Thank you Carole!! It's a great boost when I k...Thank you Carole!! It's a great boost when I know people actually enjoy my work! I'm looking forward to the novel too ... wait ... do I have to write it first though ... ??? :-)Julie Kirkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02606220227331834682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6789689551731499139.post-86020592541031432492019-01-30T20:35:09.341+00:002019-01-30T20:35:09.341+00:00Hi Julie. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. G...Hi Julie. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Great pace and well written (to my eyes anyway). You should definitely share some more stories in the future! Best wishes, Becky xxBeckyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07488962127399687968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6789689551731499139.post-82096633040495444362019-01-30T12:01:40.349+00:002019-01-30T12:01:40.349+00:00Hi Julie, I loved your story. Hugely relatable and...Hi Julie, I loved your story. Hugely relatable and the right tone and pace. It works really well written in the second person. Keep writing, you definitely have a talent. Look forward to your novel. Regards, Carole. Carole Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16104768720202380916noreply@blogger.com